must fill in

Carl Kirstein: thankyou

Carl Kirstein: thankyou

Carl Kirstein: merci beaucoup, mai vous avez une merveilleuse journée

well done, this is a very moody piece. At first I thought the high contrast in the sky was a bit too powerful, and that it detracted from the sombre quality in the lower half of the picture (almost so much so that I didn't see the "raft"), but the sun does bring a necessary balance to the composition (and it might be desirable for the raft to be "lost" in the picture). I don't know whether this image is cropped from the original, but have you tried cropping out more of the sky so that more of the picture plane is filled wiht ocean? This might help communicate how the 'Medusa' is lost at sea, like in the Gericault painting.